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1 Corinthians 16

The collection for the holy ones — on the first day of every week store up as you are prospered; when I arrive, those you approve will carry the grace to Jerusalem. Through Macedonia to you, perhaps to winter — for now in Ephesus until Pentecost, a door opened and many opposing. Do not despise Timothy; send him on in peace. Apollos will come when he has opportunity. Stay awake, stand, act like men, become strong — all things in love. The house of Stephanas, firstfruits of Achaia. The assemblies of Asia greet you, Aquila and Prisca greet you — greet one another with a holy kiss. In Paul’s own hand — if anyone does not love the Lord, let him be accursed. Marana tha. The grace of the Lord Jesus be with you.

1
Περὶ δὲ τῆς λογείας τῆς εἰς τοὺς ἁγίους, ὥσπερ διέταξα ταῖς ἐκκλησίαις τῆς Γαλατίας, οὕτως καὶ ὑμεῖς ποιήσατε.
Now concerning the collection for the holy ones: as I directed the assemblies of Galatia, so also you do.
2
κατὰ μίαν ⸀σαββάτου ἕκαστος ὑμῶν παρ’ ἑαυτῷ τιθέτω θησαυρίζων ὅ τι ⸀ἐὰν εὐοδῶται, ἵνα μὴ ὅταν ἔλθω τότε λογεῖαι γίνωνται.
On the first day of every week let each of you put something aside by himself, storing up whatever he may be prospered with, so that when I come there may not be collections then.
Why this rendering

1Cor.16.2 Observation

Syntactic observation

Περὶ δὲ τῆς λογείας τῆς εἰς τοὺς ἁγίους … κατὰ μίαν σαββάτου ἕκαστος ὑμῶν παρ’ ἑαυτῷ τιθέτω θησαυρίζων ὅ τι ἐὰν εὐοδῶται … τούτους πέμψω ἀπενεγκεῖν τὴν χάριν ὑμῶν εἰς Ἰερουσαλήμ — concerning the collection for the holy ones … on the first day of every week let each of you put something aside by himself, storing up whatever he may be prospered with … to carry your grace to Jerusalem. λογεία (collection) occurs in the New Testament only in these two verses — Rom 15:26 names the same undertaking with another word, κοινωνία (sharing), and this edition keeps the two apart as ‘collection / sharing’. κατὰ μίαν σαββάτου is the phrase of Acts 20:7, ‘the first day of the week’. εὐοδόομαι (be prospered on one’s way) is the verb of Rom 1:10, with ὁδός (way) inside it. τὴν χάριν ὑμῶν in v.3 calls the collection ‘grace’ — this edition does not paraphrase ‘gift’. δοκιμάζω (approve) follows the rule of Rom 1:28 and 14:22. ἐν παρόδῳ in v.7 (in passing) is a New Testament hapax. θύρα … ἀνέῳγεν in v.9 (a door has been opened) is perfect — the picture of Acts 14:27, ‘the door of faith’. ἐνεργής (effective) is the adjective of ἐνεργέω (work; 12:6); English ‘effective’ loses the root (a recorded loss). ἀντίκειμαι (oppose) is fixed at Luke 13:17 and 21:15.

Rendering options · 2

Adopted
“your grace” — χάρις kept even of the collection

Basis The text calls the collection grace; one word, one rendering.

“your gift”

Basis The familiar paraphrase.

Rejected It takes the place of δῶρον / δωρεά and cuts the thread of χάρις.

Lost in translation

λογεία (vv.1-2) ↔ κοινωνία in Rom 15:26 — ‘collection / sharing’ keeps the two words apart.

Survives in · this edition — 2 of the nine carry it (this language among them)

ἐνεργής (v.9) ↔ ἐνεργέω (12:6, work) — ‘effective / work’ loses the root.

this edition — none of the nine carries it (measured)
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ὅταν δὲ παραγένωμαι, οὓς ⸀ἐὰν δοκιμάσητε δι’ ἐπιστολῶν, τούτους πέμψω ἀπενεγκεῖν τὴν χάριν ὑμῶν εἰς Ἰερουσαλήμ·
And when I arrive, whomever you approve I will send with letters to carry your grace to Jerusalem;
first here Jerusalem Ἰερουσαλήμ Ierousalēm
4
ἐὰν δὲ ⸂ἄξιον ᾖ⸃ τοῦ κἀμὲ πορεύεσθαι, σὺν ἐμοὶ πορεύσονται.
and if it is worthy that I go too, they will go with me.
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Ἐλεύσομαι δὲ πρὸς ὑμᾶς ὅταν Μακεδονίαν διέλθω, Μακεδονίαν γὰρ διέρχομαι,
Now I will come to you when I have passed through Macedonia, for I am passing through Macedonia;
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πρὸς ὑμᾶς δὲ τυχὸν ⸀παραμενῶ ἢ ⸀καὶ παραχειμάσω, ἵνα ὑμεῖς με προπέμψητε οὗ ἐὰν πορεύωμαι.
and perhaps I will remain with you, or even winter, so that you may send me on my way wherever I go.
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οὐ θέλω γὰρ ὑμᾶς ἄρτι ἐν παρόδῳ ἰδεῖν, ἐλπίζω ⸀γὰρ χρόνον τινὰ ἐπιμεῖναι πρὸς ὑμᾶς, ἐὰν ὁ κύριος ⸀ἐπιτρέψῃ.
For I do not want to see you now in passing, for I hope to stay on with you for some time, if the Lord allows.
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⸀ἐπιμενῶ δὲ ἐν Ἐφέσῳ ἕως τῆς πεντηκοστῆς·
But I will stay on in Ephesus until Pentecost;
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θύρα γάρ μοι ἀνέῳγεν μεγάλη καὶ ἐνεργής, καὶ ἀντικείμενοι πολλοί.
for a door has been opened to me, great and effective, and there are many who oppose.
10
Ἐὰν δὲ ἔλθῃ Τιμόθεος, βλέπετε ἵνα ἀφόβως γένηται πρὸς ὑμᾶς, τὸ γὰρ ἔργον κυρίου ἐργάζεται ὡς ⸀κἀγώ·
Now if Timothy comes, watch out that he may be with you without fear, for he works the work of the Lord, as I also do.
11
μή τις οὖν αὐτὸν ἐξουθενήσῃ. προπέμψατε δὲ αὐτὸν ἐν εἰρήνῃ, ἵνα ἔλθῃ πρός ⸀με, ἐκδέχομαι γὰρ αὐτὸν μετὰ τῶν ἀδελφῶν.
So let no one treat him with contempt. But send him on his way in peace, so that he may come to me; for I am waiting for him with the brothers.
12
Περὶ δὲ Ἀπολλῶ τοῦ ἀδελφοῦ, πολλὰ παρεκάλεσα αὐτὸν ἵνα ἔλθῃ πρὸς ὑμᾶς μετὰ τῶν ἀδελφῶν· καὶ πάντως οὐκ ἦν θέλημα ἵνα νῦν ἔλθῃ, ἐλεύσεται δὲ ὅταν εὐκαιρήσῃ.
Now concerning Apollos the brother: I exhorted him much to come to you with the brothers, and it was not at all the will that he come now; but he will come when he has opportunity.
13
Γρηγορεῖτε, στήκετε ἐν τῇ πίστει, ἀνδρίζεσθε, κραταιοῦσθε.
Stay awake, stand in the faith, act like men, become strong.
Why this rendering

1Cor.16.13 Observation

Syntactic observation

Γρηγορεῖτε, στήκετε ἐν τῇ πίστει, ἀνδρίζεσθε, κραταιοῦσθε. πάντα ὑμῶν ἐν ἀγάπῃ γινέσθω — stay awake, stand in the faith, act like men, become strong. Let all your things be done in love. Four imperatives follow without a conjunction — γρηγορέω (stay awake — the doorkeeper’s verb of Mark 13:34-37), στήκω (stand; Rom 14:4), ἀνδρίζομαι (act like men — a New Testament hapax, the verb from ἀνήρ, man), κραταιόομαι (become strong — the verb of the child who ‘became strong’ in Luke 1:80, 2:40). This edition keeps all four as verbs and adds no conjunction. ἀνδρίζομαι is not paraphrased ‘be brave’ — ‘man’ is in the word, the ἀνήρ of 13:11, ‘when I became a man’. πάντως with the negative in v.12 is ‘not at all’ (the rule of Rom 3:9). εὐκαιρέω (have opportunity) is the verb of Mark 6:31, ‘they had no opportunity’. ἔταξαν ἑαυτούς in v.15 (they appointed themselves) is the active of τάσσω in Acts 13:48 and Rom 13:1. παρουσία in v.17 is the ‘coming’ of men, so its site parts from the ‘coming’ of Matt 24:3 only in Korean honorific. ὑστέρημα (lack) is the widow’s ‘lack’ in Luke 21:4 and ἀναπληρόω (fill up) the verb of 14:16 — ‘they filled up your lack’.

Rendering options · 2

Adopted
“act like men” — ἀνδρίζεσθε with the word kept

Basis ἀνήρ is inside the word; it links to ‘a man’ in 13:11.

“be courageous”

Basis The familiar paraphrase.

Rejected The picture in the word vanishes and it takes the place of θαρσέω (take courage; Matt 9:2).

Lost in translation

ἀνδρίζομαι (v.13) ↔ ἀνήρ (13:11) — ‘act like men / a man’ keeps the root.

Survives in · this edition — 2 of the nine carry it (this language among them)

ὑστέρημα ↔ ἀναπληρόω (v.17) — ‘lack / fill up’; ὑστέρημα is the noun of ὑστερέω (fall short; 1:7), a root English cannot keep.

Survives in · this edition — 1 of the nine carry it (not this language)
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πάντα ὑμῶν ἐν ἀγάπῃ γινέσθω.
Let all your things be done in love.
15
Παρακαλῶ δὲ ὑμᾶς, ἀδελφοί· οἴδατε τὴν οἰκίαν Στεφανᾶ, ὅτι ἐστὶν ἀπαρχὴ τῆς Ἀχαΐας καὶ εἰς διακονίαν τοῖς ἁγίοις ἔταξαν ἑαυτούς·
Now I exhort you, brothers: you know the house of Stephanas, that it is the firstfruits of Achaia, and they appointed themselves to the service of the holy ones —
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ἵνα καὶ ὑμεῖς ὑποτάσσησθε τοῖς τοιούτοις καὶ παντὶ τῷ συνεργοῦντι καὶ κοπιῶντι.
that you also be subject to such people, and to everyone who works together and labours.
17
χαίρω δὲ ἐπὶ τῇ παρουσίᾳ Στεφανᾶ καὶ Φορτουνάτου καὶ Ἀχαϊκοῦ, ὅτι τὸ ⸀ὑμέτερον ὑστέρημα οὗτοι ἀνεπλήρωσαν,
And I rejoice at the coming of Stephanas and Fortunatus and Achaicus, because they filled up your lack;
18
ἀνέπαυσαν γὰρ τὸ ἐμὸν πνεῦμα καὶ τὸ ὑμῶν. ἐπιγινώσκετε οὖν τοὺς τοιούτους.
for they gave rest to my spirit and to yours. So recognise such people.
19
Ἀσπάζονται ὑμᾶς αἱ ἐκκλησίαι τῆς Ἀσίας. ⸀ἀσπάζεται ὑμᾶς ἐν κυρίῳ πολλὰ Ἀκύλας καὶ ⸀Πρίσκα σὺν τῇ κατ’ οἶκον αὐτῶν ἐκκλησίᾳ.
The assemblies of Asia greet you. Aquila and Prisca greet you much in the Lord, with the assembly in their house.
20
ἀσπάζονται ὑμᾶς οἱ ἀδελφοὶ πάντες. ἀσπάσασθε ἀλλήλους ἐν φιλήματι ἁγίῳ.
All the brothers greet you. Greet one another with a holy kiss.
21
Ὁ ἀσπασμὸς τῇ ἐμῇ χειρὶ Παύλου.
The greeting in my own hand — Paul’s.
22
εἴ τις οὐ φιλεῖ τὸν ⸀κύριον, ἤτω ἀνάθεμα. ⸂Μαράνα θά⸃.
If anyone does not love the Lord, let him be accursed. Marana tha.
Why this rendering

1Cor.16.22 Observation

Syntactic observation

Ὁ ἀσπασμὸς τῇ ἐμῇ χειρὶ Παύλου. εἴ τις οὐ φιλεῖ τὸν κύριον, ἤτω ἀνάθεμα. Μαράνα θά. ἡ χάρις τοῦ κυρίου Ἰησοῦ μεθ’ ὑμῶν. ἡ ἀγάπη μου μετὰ πάντων ὑμῶν ἐν Χριστῷ Ἰησοῦ — the greeting in my own hand — Paul’s. If anyone does not love the Lord, let him be accursed. Marana tha. The grace of the Lord Jesus be with you. My love be with you all in Christ Jesus. Verse 21 is the point where the letter passes from the scribe to Paul’s own hand — the counterpart of Rom 16:22, where the scribe Tertius leaves his own name. Μαράνα θά in v.22 is Aramaic — the base text prints it as two words (marked ⸂⸃; some manuscripts join them as one) and attaches no gloss. This edition carries the sound only (‘Marana tha’) and does not insert ‘Our Lord, come’ where the base text gives no gloss; unlike ‘Talitha koum’ in Mark 5:41 there is no ὅ ἐστιν here. ἀνάθεμα (accursed) is the word of 12:3, ‘Jesus is accursed’, returning at the letter’s end. φιλέω (love) occurs in this letter only here, a different word from the ἀγάπη (love) of vv.14 and 24 — English has ‘love’ for both, so the split is lost (a recorded loss; John 21:15 ‘hold dear’ is the rule for the site where it stands against ἀγαπάω in one verse). Verses 23-24 are verbless blessings — ‘be’ is supplied, as in Rom 16:20. The base text marks ⸀Ἰησοῦ in v.23 and v.24 as variants (some manuscripts add ‘Christ’; some add ‘Amen’).

Rendering options · 2

Adopted
“Marana tha” — the sound only, no gloss

Basis The base text gives no gloss; adding one manufactures a sentence the text lacks.

“Our Lord, come!”

Basis Translating the Aramaic by sense.

Rejected It erases the sound the text kept and closes an Aramaic that can also be read ‘our Lord has come’.

Lost in translation

φιλέω (v.22) ↔ ἀγάπη (vv.14, 24) — two words, one ‘love’ in English.

this edition — none of the nine carries it (measured)

Μαράνα θά — the sound and the two-word break of the base text are carried.

Survives in · this edition — 2 of the nine carry it (this language among them)
23
ἡ χάρις τοῦ κυρίου ⸀Ἰησοῦ μεθ’ ὑμῶν.
The grace of the Lord Jesus be with you.
first here Jesus Ἰησοῦς Iēsous
24
ἡ ἀγάπη μου μετὰ πάντων ὑμῶν ἐν Χριστῷ ⸀Ἰησοῦ.
My love be with you all in Christ Jesus.
first here Christ Χριστός Christos