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Luke 1

It opens with a preface to Theophilus. Zechariah is struck dumb in the sanctuary, Mary receives the news, and John is born.

1
Ἐπειδήπερ πολλοὶ ἐπεχείρησαν ἀνατάξασθαι διήγησιν περὶ τῶν πεπληροφορημένων ἐν ἡμῖν πραγμάτων,
Inasmuch as many have undertaken to compile in order a narrative concerning the things fully accomplished among us,

Verses 1 to 4 are one sentence in Greek — the most polished Greek in the four Gospels, and English can hold it as one.

pronoun us = the writer and his readers
2
καθὼς παρέδοσαν ἡμῖν οἱ ἀπ’ ἀρχῆς αὐτόπται καὶ ὑπηρέται γενόμενοι τοῦ λόγου,
just as those who from the beginning were eyewitnesses and became officers of the word handed them down to us,

Servants of the word renders ὑπηρέται (hypēretai), under-rowers — this edition keeps them apart from the table-servant word.

pronoun them = the things fully accomplished
pronoun us = the writer and his readers
3
ἔδοξε κἀμοὶ παρηκολουθηκότι ἄνωθεν πᾶσιν ἀκριβῶς καθεξῆς σοι γράψαι, κράτιστε Θεόφιλε,
it seemed good to me also, having followed all things closely from the beginning, to write them for you accurately and in order, most excellent Theophilus,

Most excellent (κράτιστος, kratistos) is a form of address for a man of rank. Theophilus means “friend of God”, and the text does not say whether it is a name or a way of naming any reader.

first here Theophilus Θεόφιλος Theophilos
pronoun me = the writer
pronoun them = all things
pronoun you = Theophilus
Why this rendering

Luke.1.3 Observation

Syntactic observation

Of the four gospels this is the only place where the author states what he did, and those four verses (1-4) hold ten words unique in the four Gospels — ἐπειδήπερ, inasmuch as; ἐπιχειρέω, to undertake; ἀνατάσσομαι, to compile in order; διήγησις, a narrative; πληροφορέω, to be fully accomplished; αὐτόπτης, an eyewitness; κράτιστος, most excellent; Θεόφιλος; κατηχέω, to be instructed by hearing; ἀσφάλεια, certainty. Nowhere else in the four Gospels do first occurrences crowd so thickly. Besides these, παρακολουθέω, to follow closely, stands at two places, the other Mark 16:17 — inside the longer ending, printed under ⟦ ⟧. ἀκριβῶς, accurately, is also one of two, the other Matthew 2:8, where Herod says search accurately for the child. καθεξῆς, in order, occurs twice in Luke (1:3, 8:1). The build of the sentence is striking too: v.1 says many have undertaken, v.2 as those who from the beginning were eyewitnesses handed down to us, and v.3 it seemed good to me also … to write. So the author first records that others came before him, then states what he did in three adverbs — ἄνωθεν, from the beginning; ἀκριβῶς, accurately; καθεξῆς, in order. Verse 4 gives the purpose: ἵνα ἐπιγνῷς … τὴν ἀσφάλειαν, that you may know the certainty.

Rendering options · 2

Adopted
“it seemed good to me also … to write in order” — all three adverbs kept

Basis ἄνωθεν, ἀκριβῶς and καθεξῆς are the author's statement of method and none is collapsed; ἀκριβῶς is held to one rendering with Matthew 2:8 so it stays countable.

Compress the adverbs — “to write an orderly account”

Basis Three adverbs together read heavily in English and Korean.

Rejected These four verses are the one place the author describes his own work, and the statement rides on the three adverbs; compressing them removes what he says he did.

Lost in translation

vv.1-4 as one sentence

In Greek vv.1-4 are a single sentence of stacked subordinate clauses, a periodic build found nowhere else in the four Gospels. This edition keeps the one sentence in English, so the arc from many have undertaken to therefore I too still stands in a single breath.

Survives in · this edition — 7 of the nine carry it (this language among them)
4
ἵνα ἐπιγνῷς περὶ ὧν κατηχήθης λόγων τὴν ἀσφάλειαν.
so that you may know the certainty of the words in which you were instructed.

Certainty (ἀσφάλεια, asphaleia) is a firm footing — the purpose of the whole book is put in one word.

pronoun you = Theophilus — both times
5
Ἐγένετο ἐν ταῖς ἡμέραις ⸀Ἡρῴδου βασιλέως τῆς Ἰουδαίας ἱερεύς τις ὀνόματι Ζαχαρίας ἐξ ἐφημερίας Ἀβιά, ⸀καὶ γυνὴ ⸀αὐτῷ ἐκ τῶν θυγατέρων Ἀαρών, καὶ τὸ ὄνομα αὐτῆς Ἐλισάβετ.
It came to pass in the days of Herod, king of Judea, that there was a certain priest named Zechariah, of the course of Abijah; and his wife was of the daughters of Aaron, and her name was Elizabeth.

Division of Abijah — one of the courses of priests who served in turn.

first here Herod Ἡρῴδης Hērōdēs
first here Judea Ἰουδαία Ioudaia
first here Zechariah Ζαχαρίας Zacharias
first here Abijah Ἀβιά Abia
first here Aaron Ἀαρών Aarōn
first here Elizabeth Ἐλισάβετ Elisabet
pronoun his = Zechariah
pronoun her = Zechariah's wife
Why this rendering

Luke.1.5 Observation

Syntactic observation

The Greek of the preface (vv.1-4) and the Greek from v.5 differ in texture. Verses 1-4 are one long periodic sentence; v.5 opens Ἐγένετο ἐν ταῖς ἡμέραις…, it came to pass in the days of… — the narrative manner of the Septuagint. So having written four lines of Greek preface the author changes his style at once. ἐγένετο occurs seven times in this chapter (vv.5, 8, 23, 41, 44, 59, 65) — and not once in the four lines of preface. ἐφημερία, a priestly division, occurs twice in the four Gospels and both are in this chapter (1:5, 8). And Luke dates the time by persons: the days of Herod the king, the division of Abijah, one of the daughters of Aaron. Such circumstantial marking is absent from Mark; Matthew has Herod (2:1) but names no division or descent. The δικαιώματα, ordinances, and ἄμεμπτοι, faultless, of v.6 are both unique in the four Gospels. Verse 7 states the couple's condition with στεῖρα, barren, and προβεβηκότες ἐν ταῖς ἡμέραις, advanced in their days — and at v.36 that στεῖρα returns: she who was called barren. The word stands three times in the four Gospels, all three in Luke, and the third turns it over at 23:29 — μακάριαι αἱ στεῖραι, blessed are the barren. What is a burden at 1:7 is a blessing at 23:29. And since the μακαρίζω of v.48 shares its root with the μακάριος of 23:29, within one book they will call me blessed stands over against blessed are the barren.

Rendering options · 2

Adopted
“It came to pass in the days of…” — ἐγένετο not smoothed away

Basis The opening marks the change of style; smoothing it into in the days of Herod there was… erases the difference in texture between preface and narrative.

Smooth to “In the days of Herod there was a priest named Zechariah”

Basis The doubled verb reads awkwardly in English and Korean.

Rejected The awkwardness is in the Greek too — the author has deliberately written in the older manner. Smoothing hides the seam between vv.1-4 and v.5, and that seam is what this chapter shows.

6
ἦσαν δὲ δίκαιοι ἀμφότεροι ⸀ἐναντίον τοῦ θεοῦ, πορευόμενοι ἐν πάσαις ταῖς ἐντολαῖς καὶ δικαιώμασιν τοῦ κυρίου ἄμεμπτοι.
And they were both righteous before God, walking faultless in all the commandments and ordinances of the Lord.

Ordinances (δικαιώματα, dikaiōmata) shares its root with righteous at the start of the verse.

pronoun they = Zechariah and Elizabeth
7
καὶ οὐκ ἦν αὐτοῖς τέκνον, καθότι ⸂ἦν ἡ Ἐλισάβετ⸃ στεῖρα, καὶ ἀμφότεροι προβεβηκότες ἐν ταῖς ἡμέραις αὐτῶν ἦσαν.
And they had no child, since Elizabeth was barren, and both were advanced in their days.

Advanced in their days keeps a Semitic turn rather than smoothing it to “old”.

pronoun they = Zechariah and Elizabeth
pronoun their = Zechariah and Elizabeth
8
Ἐγένετο δὲ ἐν τῷ ἱερατεύειν αὐτὸν ἐν τῇ τάξει τῆς ἐφημερίας αὐτοῦ ἔναντι τοῦ θεοῦ
And it came to pass, while he was serving as priest before God in the order of his course,

It came to pass renders a Semitic construction this book uses again and again — the Greek of the story is far plainer than that of verses 1 to 4.

pronoun he = Zechariah
pronoun his = Zechariah
9
κατὰ τὸ ἔθος τῆς ἱερατείας ἔλαχε τοῦ θυμιᾶσαι εἰσελθὼν εἰς τὸν ναὸν τοῦ κυρίου,
that according to the custom of the priesthood the lot fell to him to go into the sanctuary of the Lord and burn incense.

The lot fell to him — burning incense fell to a priest once in a lifetime.

pronoun him = Zechariah
10
καὶ πᾶν τὸ πλῆθος ἦν τοῦ λαοῦ προσευχόμενον ἔξω τῇ ὥρᾳ τοῦ θυμιάματος·
And the whole multitude of the people was praying outside at the hour of incense.

Outside — the people are held apart from the sanctuary.

11
ὤφθη δὲ αὐτῷ ἄγγελος κυρίου ἑστὼς ἐκ δεξιῶν τοῦ θυσιαστηρίου τοῦ θυμιάματος.
And an angel of the Lord appeared to him, standing at the right of the altar of incense.

At the right of the altar — the side is named, as at Mark 16:5.

pronoun him = Zechariah
12
καὶ ἐταράχθη Ζαχαρίας ἰδών, καὶ φόβος ἐπέπεσεν ἐπ’ αὐτόν.
And seeing him Zechariah was troubled, and fear fell upon him.

Fear fell upon him — the same phrase returns at verse 65.

pronoun him = the angel — “fear fell upon him” is Zechariah
13
εἶπεν δὲ πρὸς αὐτὸν ὁ ἄγγελος· Μὴ φοβοῦ, Ζαχαρία, διότι εἰσηκούσθη ἡ δέησίς σου, καὶ ἡ γυνή σου Ἐλισάβετ γεννήσει υἱόν σοι, καὶ καλέσεις τὸ ὄνομα αὐτοῦ Ἰωάννην·
But the angel said to him, “Do not be afraid, Zechariah, for your supplication was heard, and your wife Elizabeth will bear you a son, and you shall call his name John.

John means “the Lord has shown favour”, and the text does not say so.

first here John Ἰωάννης Iōannēs
pronoun him = Zechariah
pronoun your = Zechariah — both times
pronoun you = Zechariah — both times
pronoun his = the son
14
καὶ ἔσται χαρά σοι καὶ ἀγαλλίασις, καὶ πολλοὶ ἐπὶ τῇ ⸀γενέσει αὐτοῦ χαρήσονται·
And you will have joy and gladness, and many will rejoice at his birth.

Joy and gladness — two different words, and this edition keeps them apart.

pronoun you = Zechariah
pronoun his = the son
15
ἔσται γὰρ μέγας ἐνώπιον ⸀τοῦ κυρίου, καὶ οἶνον καὶ σίκερα οὐ μὴ πίῃ, καὶ πνεύματος ἁγίου πλησθήσεται ἔτι ἐκ κοιλίας μητρὸς αὐτοῦ,
For he will be great before the Lord; and he shall drink no wine or strong drink, and he will be filled with the Holy Spirit while still in his mother's womb.

Strong drink renders σίκερα (sikera), a Semitic word kept as sound.

pronoun he = the son — every “he” here is the son
pronoun his = the son
16
καὶ πολλοὺς τῶν υἱῶν Ἰσραὴλ ἐπιστρέψει ἐπὶ κύριον τὸν θεὸν αὐτῶν·
And he will turn many of the sons of Israel to the Lord their God.

Sons of Israel is a Semitic turn kept word for word.

first here Israel Ἰσραήλ Israēl
pronoun he = the son
pronoun their = the sons of Israel
17
καὶ αὐτὸς προελεύσεται ἐνώπιον αὐτοῦ ἐν πνεύματι καὶ δυνάμει Ἠλίου, ἐπιστρέψαι καρδίας πατέρων ἐπὶ τέκνα καὶ ἀπειθεῖς ἐν φρονήσει δικαίων, ἑτοιμάσαι κυρίῳ λαὸν κατεσκευασμένον.
And he will go before him in the spirit and power of Elijah, to turn the hearts of fathers to their children and the disobedient to the prudence of the righteous, to make ready for the Lord a people prepared.”

Prudence (φρόνησις, phronēsis) is practical good sense. The words take up Malachi 4:5–6.

first here Elijah Ἠλίας Ēlias
pronoun he = the son
pronoun him = the Lord
pronoun their = the fathers
18
καὶ εἶπεν Ζαχαρίας πρὸς τὸν ἄγγελον· Κατὰ τί γνώσομαι τοῦτο; ἐγὼ γάρ εἰμι πρεσβύτης καὶ ἡ γυνή μου προβεβηκυῖα ἐν ταῖς ἡμέραις αὐτῆς.
And Zechariah said to the angel, “By what shall I know this? For I am old and my wife is advanced in her days.”

By what shall I know this — the asking that verse 20 answers with silence.

pronoun I = Zechariah
pronoun this = what the angel said
pronoun my = Zechariah
pronoun her = Zechariah's wife
19
καὶ ἀποκριθεὶς ὁ ἄγγελος εἶπεν αὐτῷ· Ἐγώ εἰμι Γαβριὴλ ὁ παρεστηκὼς ἐνώπιον τοῦ θεοῦ, καὶ ἀπεστάλην λαλῆσαι πρὸς σὲ καὶ εὐαγγελίσασθαί σοι ταῦτα·
And answering, the angel said to him, “I am Gabriel, who stands before God, and I was sent to speak to you and to bring you this good news.

Gabriel is named here and at verse 26, and nowhere else in the four Gospels.

first here Gabriel Γαβριήλ Gabriēl
pronoun him = Zechariah
pronoun I = Gabriel — both times
pronoun who = Gabriel
pronoun you = Zechariah — both times
20
καὶ ἰδοὺ ἔσῃ σιωπῶν καὶ μὴ δυνάμενος λαλῆσαι ἄχρι ἧς ἡμέρας γένηται ταῦτα, ἀνθ’ ὧν οὐκ ἐπίστευσας τοῖς λόγοις μου, οἵτινες πληρωθήσονται εἰς τὸν καιρὸν αὐτῶν.
And behold, you will be silent and unable to speak until the day these things happen, because you did not believe my words, which will be fulfilled in their time.”

In their time renders καιρός (kairos), the fit moment.

pronoun you = Zechariah — both times
pronoun these things = what the angel said
pronoun my = Gabriel
pronoun which = my words
pronoun their = my words
21
Καὶ ἦν ὁ λαὸς προσδοκῶν τὸν Ζαχαρίαν, καὶ ἐθαύμαζον ἐν τῷ χρονίζειν ⸂ἐν τῷ ναῷ αὐτόν⸃.
And the people were waiting for Zechariah, and they wondered at his delay in the sanctuary.

Wondered at his delay — the people are counting the minutes outside.

pronoun they = the people
pronoun his = Zechariah
22
ἐξελθὼν δὲ οὐκ ⸀ἐδύνατο λαλῆσαι αὐτοῖς, καὶ ἐπέγνωσαν ὅτι ὀπτασίαν ἑώρακεν ἐν τῷ ναῷ· καὶ αὐτὸς ἦν διανεύων αὐτοῖς, καὶ διέμενεν κωφός.
And coming out he could not speak to them, and they knew he had seen a vision in the sanctuary; and he kept making signs to them and remained mute.

Remained mute — the Greek word covers both deaf and unable to speak.

pronoun he = Zechariah — every “he” here is Zechariah
pronoun them = the people — both times
pronoun they = the people
23
καὶ ἐγένετο ὡς ἐπλήσθησαν αἱ ἡμέραι τῆς λειτουργίας αὐτοῦ, ἀπῆλθεν εἰς τὸν οἶκον αὐτοῦ.
And when the days of his service were completed he went away to his house.

Service (λειτουργία, leitourgia) is the word behind “liturgy” — a public duty.

pronoun his = Zechariah
pronoun he = Zechariah
24
Μετὰ δὲ ταύτας τὰς ἡμέρας συνέλαβεν Ἐλισάβετ ἡ γυνὴ αὐτοῦ· καὶ περιέκρυβεν ἑαυτὴν μῆνας πέντε, λέγουσα
And after those days Elizabeth his wife conceived, and she hid herself for five months, saying,

She hid herself — the text gives no reason.

pronoun his = Zechariah
pronoun she = Elizabeth
pronoun herself = Elizabeth
25
ὅτι Οὕτως μοι ⸀πεποίηκεν κύριος ἐν ἡμέραις αἷς ἐπεῖδεν ⸀ἀφελεῖν ὄνειδός μου ἐν ἀνθρώποις.
“Thus the Lord has done for me in the days when he looked on me, to take away my disgrace among people.”

Disgrace (ὄνειδος, oneidos) is used once in the four Gospels.

pronoun me = Elizabeth — both times
pronoun he = the Lord
26
Ἐν δὲ τῷ μηνὶ τῷ ἕκτῳ ἀπεστάλη ὁ ἄγγελος Γαβριὴλ ⸀ἀπὸ τοῦ θεοῦ εἰς πόλιν τῆς Γαλιλαίας ᾗ ὄνομα Ναζαρὲθ
And in the sixth month the angel Gabriel was sent from God to a city of Galilee named Nazareth,

The sixth month counts from verse 24 — the two births are braided.

first here Galileans Γαλιλαία Galilaia
first here Nazareth Ναζαρέθ Nazareth
27
πρὸς παρθένον ⸀ἐμνηστευμένην ἀνδρὶ ᾧ ὄνομα Ἰωσὴφ ἐξ οἴκου Δαυίδ, καὶ τὸ ὄνομα τῆς παρθένου Μαριάμ.
to a virgin betrothed to a man named Joseph, of the house of David; and the virgin's name was Mary.

Virgin renders παρθένος (parthenos), the word of Matthew 1:23. It stands twice in this verse.

first here Joseph Ἰωσήφ Iōsēph
first here daughter Δαυίδ Dauid
first here Mariam Μαριάμ Mariam
28
καὶ ⸀εἰσελθὼν πρὸς αὐτὴν εἶπεν· Χαῖρε, κεχαριτωμένη, ὁ κύριος μετὰ ⸀σοῦ.
And coming in to her he said, “Rejoice, you who have been graced; the Lord is with you.”

Rejoice renders χαῖρε (chaire), which is also the everyday greeting; this edition keeps the rejoicing in it. Graced (χαριτόω, charitoō) shares its root with grace at verse 30.

pronoun her = Mary
pronoun he = the angel
pronoun you = Mary — both times
Why this rendering

Luke.1.28 Observation

Syntactic observation

κεχαριτωμένη is the perfect passive participle of χαριτόω, and the verb is unique in the four Gospels. It shares a root with χάρις, grace, which occurs eight times in Luke and four in John and not at all in Matthew or Mark. So the root is familiar and the form is not. Being perfect passive it means one who stands in a state of having been graced — and Luke himself unfolds it at v.30: εὗρες γὰρ χάριν παρὰ τῷ θεῷ, for you have found grace with God. The gloss is inside the text, and the translation need not anticipate it at v.28. The χαῖρε before it divides too: an imperative meaning rejoice, and also the ordinary greeting of the day. Verse 29 takes it up — Mary διεταράχθη, was greatly troubled (unique in the four Gospels), and reasons ποταπὸς εἴη ὁ ἀσπασμὸς οὗτος, what sort of greeting this might be — the text itself calling it a greeting.

Rendering options · 2

Adopted
“Rejoice, you who have been graced” — the perfect kept, nothing added

Basis The perfect passive is rendered as a state received, and beyond that the text is left to speak at v.30.

“full of grace” or “highly favoured one”

Basis Uses the settled renderings.

Rejected Full renders πλήρης, which is not here; and highly supplies a superlative the text does not mark. Being unique in the four Gospels the word cannot be checked against another place, so anything added is the translation's own judgement — which we do not make in place of v.30.

Lost in translation

the two faces of χαῖρε

χαῖρε is both rejoice and a greeting. Verse 29 calls it a greeting, so that reading is the text's own; but dropping the joy loses the root. English has no greeting that carries both faces.

Survives in · this edition — 4 of the nine carry it (not this language)
29
ἡ δὲ ⸂ἐπὶ τῷ λόγῳ διεταράχθη⸃ καὶ διελογίζετο ποταπὸς εἴη ὁ ἀσπασμὸς οὗτος.
But she was greatly troubled at the word, and reasoned what sort of greeting this might be.

Reasoned (διαλογίζομαι, dialogizomai) is the word of Mark 2:6.

pronoun she = Mary
pronoun this = the greeting
30
καὶ εἶπεν ὁ ἄγγελος αὐτῇ· Μὴ φοβοῦ, Μαριάμ, εὗρες γὰρ χάριν παρὰ τῷ θεῷ·
And the angel said to her, “Do not be afraid, Mary, for you have found grace with God.

Grace (χάρις, charis) is the noun of the verb at verse 28.

pronoun her = Mary
pronoun you = Mary
31
καὶ ἰδοὺ συλλήμψῃ ἐν γαστρὶ καὶ τέξῃ υἱόν, καὶ καλέσεις τὸ ὄνομα αὐτοῦ Ἰησοῦν.
And behold, you will conceive in your womb and bear a son, and you shall call his name Jesus.

Jesus is the Greek form of a name that means “the Lord saves”; Matthew 1:21 explains it, and this book does not.

first here Jesus Ἰησοῦς Iēsous
pronoun you = Mary — both times
pronoun your = Mary
pronoun his = the son
32
οὗτος ἔσται μέγας καὶ υἱὸς Ὑψίστου κληθήσεται, καὶ δώσει αὐτῷ κύριος ὁ θεὸς τὸν θρόνον Δαυὶδ τοῦ πατρὸς αὐτοῦ,
He will be great, and will be called Son of the Most High; and the Lord God will give him the throne of David his father,

Most High (ὕψιστος, hypsistos) is a title this book uses more than the others.

pronoun He = the son
pronoun him = the son
pronoun his = the son
33
καὶ βασιλεύσει ἐπὶ τὸν οἶκον Ἰακὼβ εἰς τοὺς αἰῶνας, καὶ τῆς βασιλείας αὐτοῦ οὐκ ἔσται τέλος.
and he will reign over the house of Jacob to the ages, and of his kingdom there will be no end.”

To the ages keeps the Greek plural.

first here Jacob Ἰακώβ Iakōb
pronoun he = the son
pronoun his = the son
34
εἶπεν δὲ Μαριὰμ πρὸς τὸν ἄγγελον· Πῶς ἔσται τοῦτο, ἐπεὶ ἄνδρα οὐ γινώσκω;
And Mary said to the angel, “How will this be, since I do not know a man?”

I do not know a man keeps the Semitic use of “know”.

pronoun this = what the angel said
pronoun I = Mary
35
καὶ ἀποκριθεὶς ὁ ἄγγελος εἶπεν αὐτῇ· Πνεῦμα ἅγιον ἐπελεύσεται ἐπὶ σέ, καὶ δύναμις Ὑψίστου ἐπισκιάσει σοι· διὸ καὶ τὸ γεννώμενον ἅγιον κληθήσεται, υἱὸς θεοῦ·
And answering, the angel said to her, “The Holy Spirit will come upon you, and the power of the Most High will overshadow you; therefore the one being born will be called holy, the Son of God.

Overshadow (ἐπισκιάζω, episkiazō) is the verb used of the cloud at 9:34. Where holy attaches — to the child or as a title — is not settled in the Greek.

pronoun her = Mary
pronoun you = Mary — both times
36
καὶ ἰδοὺ Ἐλισάβετ ἡ ⸀συγγενίς σου καὶ αὐτὴ ⸀συνείληφεν υἱὸν ἐν γήρει αὐτῆς, καὶ οὗτος μὴν ἕκτος ἐστὶν αὐτῇ τῇ καλουμένῃ στείρᾳ·
And behold, Elizabeth your relative has also conceived a son in her old age, and this is the sixth month for her who was called barren.

Relative (συγγενίς, syngenis) is used once in the four Gospels; the text does not say how they are related.

pronoun your = Mary
pronoun her = Elizabeth — both times
37
ὅτι οὐκ ἀδυνατήσει παρὰ ⸂τοῦ θεοῦ⸃ πᾶν ῥῆμα.
For no word will be impossible with God.”

No word will be impossible — word here is ῥῆμα (rhēma), which also means “thing”. English uses “word” for this and for λόγος (logos) alike — recorded as a loss.

38
εἶπεν δὲ Μαριάμ· Ἰδοὺ ἡ δούλη κυρίου· γένοιτό μοι κατὰ τὸ ῥῆμά σου. καὶ ἀπῆλθεν ἀπ’ αὐτῆς ὁ ἄγγελος.
And Mary said, “Behold, the servant of the Lord; may it be to me according to your word.” And the angel went away from her.

Servant renders δούλη (doulē), the feminine of the slave-word — this edition does not soften it. Word is ῥῆμα again.

pronoun it = what the angel said
pronoun me = Mary
pronoun your = the angel
pronoun her = Mary
39
Ἀναστᾶσα δὲ Μαριὰμ ἐν ταῖς ἡμέραις ταύταις ἐπορεύθη εἰς τὴν ὀρεινὴν μετὰ σπουδῆς εἰς πόλιν Ἰούδα,
And in those days Mary rose and went with haste into the hill country, to a city of Judah,

With haste — the going is quick, and the text does not say why.

first here Judas Ἰούδας Ioudas
40
καὶ εἰσῆλθεν εἰς τὸν οἶκον Ζαχαρίου καὶ ἠσπάσατο τὴν Ἐλισάβετ.
and entered the house of Zechariah and greeted Elizabeth.

Greeted — the greeting is what makes the child leap in verse 41.

41
καὶ ἐγένετο ὡς ἤκουσεν ⸂τὸν ἀσπασμὸν τῆς Μαρίας ἡ Ἐλισάβετ⸃, ἐσκίρτησεν τὸ βρέφος ἐν τῇ κοιλίᾳ αὐτῆς, καὶ ἐπλήσθη πνεύματος ἁγίου ἡ Ἐλισάβετ,
And it came to pass, when Elizabeth heard Mary's greeting, that the baby leapt in her womb; and Elizabeth was filled with the Holy Spirit

Leapt (σκιρτάω, skirtaō) is used in the four Gospels only here, at verse 44 and at 6:23.

first here Mary Μαρία Maria
pronoun her = Elizabeth
42
καὶ ἀνεφώνησεν ⸀κραυγῇ μεγάλῃ καὶ εἶπεν· Εὐλογημένη σὺ ἐν γυναιξίν, καὶ εὐλογημένος ὁ καρπὸς τῆς κοιλίας σου.
and cried out with a loud cry and said, “Blessed are you among women, and blessed is the fruit of your womb.

Blessed here is εὐλογέω (eulogeō); at verse 45 a different word is used, and this edition keeps them apart.

pronoun you = Mary
pronoun your = Mary
43
καὶ πόθεν μοι τοῦτο ἵνα ἔλθῃ ἡ μήτηρ τοῦ κυρίου μου πρὸς ⸀ἐμέ;
And how has this come to me, that the mother of my Lord should come to me?

The mother of my Lord — the title is used once in the four Gospels.

pronoun this = the visit
pronoun me = Elizabeth — both times
pronoun my = Elizabeth
44
ἰδοὺ γὰρ ὡς ἐγένετο ἡ φωνὴ τοῦ ἀσπασμοῦ σου εἰς τὰ ὦτά μου, ἐσκίρτησεν ⸂ἐν ἀγαλλιάσει τὸ βρέφος⸃ ἐν τῇ κοιλίᾳ μου.
For behold, when the sound of your greeting came into my ears, the baby leapt in my womb for joy.

For joy — the reason given for the leaping.

pronoun your = Mary
pronoun my = Elizabeth — both times
45
καὶ μακαρία ἡ πιστεύσασα ὅτι ἔσται τελείωσις τοῖς λελαλημένοις αὐτῇ παρὰ κυρίου.
And blessed is she who believed that there will be a fulfilment of what was spoken to her from the Lord.”

Blessed here is μακάριος (makarios), the word of the beatitudes — not the word of verse 42.

pronoun she = Mary
pronoun her = Mary
46
Καὶ εἶπεν Μαριάμ· Μεγαλύνει ἡ ψυχή μου τὸν κύριον,
And Mary said: “My life magnifies the Lord,

My life renders ψυχή (psychē), often rendered “soul”. Magnifies (μεγαλύνω, megalynō) is to make great — the Latin for it gives the song its usual name.

pronoun My = Mary
Why this rendering

Luke.1.46 Observation

Syntactic observation

The song's first two lines run on two verbs — μεγαλύνει, magnifies, and ἠγαλλίασεν, rejoiced. μεγαλύνω occurs three times in the four Gospels, one of them Matthew 23:5, where the Pharisees enlarge their own tassels. The third is twelve verses on, at 1:58 — ἐμεγάλυνεν κύριος τὸ ἔλεος αὐτοῦ, the Lord magnified his mercy — and there the Lord is the subject. One verb: a man enlarges his clothes, a life magnifies the Lord, the Lord magnifies his own mercy — three places, three subjects. ἀγαλλιάω runs once in Matthew, twice in John, twice in Luke. The tenses divide too: v.46 is present (μεγαλύνει) and v.47 aorist (ἠγαλλίασεν), and the aorists continue through vv.48-55 (ἐπέβλεψεν, ἐποίησεν, διεσκόρπισεν, καθεῖλεν, ὕψωσεν, ἐνέπλησεν, ἐξαπέστειλεν, ἀντελάβετο). So it opens in the present and passes at once into the past, and those pasts state as done what has not yet happened. The ταπείνωσις, lowliness, and μακαρίζω, to call blessed, of v.48 are both unique in the four Gospels, and the ταπεινούς, the lowly, of v.52 answers the first — lowliness twice, once Mary's own and once that of those who are lifted.

Rendering options · 2

Adopted
“My life magnifies the Lord” — one word with Matthew 23:5, the tenses kept

Basis One rendering for μεγαλύνω keeps its three places countable — and since 1:58 stands in this same chapter, a divergence would show at once; the shift from present to aorist is kept so the reader sees what is stated as done. ψυχή is fixed as life in the four Gospels.

“My soul praises the Lord”, evening the tenses to the present

Basis Reads as a song and removes the awkward shift of tense.

Rejected Praise renders αἰνέω or δοξάζω, not μεγαλύνω; and evening the tenses erases the run of eight aorists, which is what this song shows. Soul departs from the fixed rendering of ψυχή.

47
καὶ ἠγαλλίασεν τὸ πνεῦμά μου ἐπὶ τῷ θεῷ τῷ σωτῆρί μου·
and my spirit rejoiced in God my Saviour,

Rejoiced (ἀγαλλιάω, agalliaō) is a leaping joy, kept apart from the plainer joy-words.

pronoun my = Mary — both times
48
ὅτι ἐπέβλεψεν ἐπὶ τὴν ταπείνωσιν τῆς δούλης αὐτοῦ, ἰδοὺ γὰρ ἀπὸ τοῦ νῦν μακαριοῦσίν με πᾶσαι αἱ γενεαί·
because he looked upon the lowliness of his servant. For behold, from now on all generations will call me blessed,

Lowliness (ταπείνωσις, tapeinōsis) is the noun of the verb at verse 52. Servant is the slave-word again.

pronoun he = the Lord
pronoun his = the Lord
pronoun me = Mary
49
ὅτι ἐποίησέν μοι ⸀μεγάλα ὁ δυνατός, καὶ ἅγιον τὸ ὄνομα αὐτοῦ,
because the Mighty One has done great things for me; and holy is his name,

The Mighty One renders a participle — “the one who is able”.

pronoun me = Mary
pronoun his = the Mighty One
50
καὶ τὸ ἔλεος αὐτοῦ εἰς γενεὰς ⸂καὶ γενεὰς⸃ τοῖς φοβουμένοις αὐτόν.
and his mercy is to generations and generations, to those who fear him.

Generations and generations keeps the Greek doubling.

pronoun his = the Lord
pronoun him = the Lord
51
Ἐποίησεν κράτος ἐν βραχίονι αὐτοῦ, διεσκόρπισεν ὑπερηφάνους διανοίᾳ καρδίας αὐτῶν·
He worked might with his arm; he scattered the proud in the thought of their heart.

Worked strength with his arm keeps a Semitic turn word for word.

pronoun He = the Lord
pronoun he = the Lord
pronoun his = the Lord
pronoun their = the proud
52
καθεῖλεν δυνάστας ἀπὸ θρόνων καὶ ὕψωσεν ταπεινούς,
He brought down rulers from thrones and lifted up the lowly.

Brought down … lifted up — the pair that runs through this book.

pronoun He = the Lord
53
πεινῶντας ἐνέπλησεν ἀγαθῶν καὶ πλουτοῦντας ἐξαπέστειλεν κενούς.
He filled the hungry with good things, and the rich he sent away empty.

Empty (κενός, kenos) — the same word as at Mark 12:3.

pronoun He = the Lord
pronoun he = the Lord
54
ἀντελάβετο Ἰσραὴλ παιδὸς αὐτοῦ, μνησθῆναι ἐλέους,
He took hold of Israel his servant, remembering mercy,

Took hold of (ἀντιλαμβάνομαι, antilambanomai) is to take someone's part.

pronoun He = the Lord
pronoun his = the Lord
55
καθὼς ἐλάλησεν πρὸς τοὺς πατέρας ἡμῶν, τῷ Ἀβραὰμ καὶ τῷ σπέρματι αὐτοῦ εἰς τὸν αἰῶνα.
as he spoke to our fathers, to Abraham and to his seed, to the age.”

To the age — the song ends where the promise began.

first here Abraham Ἀβραάμ Abraam
pronoun he = the Lord
pronoun our = Mary and her people
pronoun his = Abraham
56
Ἔμεινεν δὲ Μαριὰμ σὺν αὐτῇ ⸀ὡς μῆνας τρεῖς, καὶ ὑπέστρεψεν εἰς τὸν οἶκον αὐτῆς.
And Mary stayed with her about three months, and returned to her house.

About three months — Mary leaves before the birth in verse 57.

pronoun her = Elizabeth — both times
57
Τῇ δὲ Ἐλισάβετ ἐπλήσθη ὁ χρόνος τοῦ τεκεῖν αὐτήν, καὶ ἐγέννησεν υἱόν.
Now the time was fulfilled for Elizabeth to give birth, and she bore a son.

The time was fulfilled — the Greek says the time was filled up.

pronoun she = Elizabeth
58
καὶ ἤκουσαν οἱ περίοικοι καὶ οἱ συγγενεῖς αὐτῆς ὅτι ἐμεγάλυνεν κύριος τὸ ἔλεος αὐτοῦ μετ’ αὐτῆς, καὶ συνέχαιρον αὐτῇ.
And her neighbours and relatives heard that the Lord had magnified his mercy toward her, and they rejoiced with her.

Rejoiced with her renders συγχαίρω (synchairō), a compound this edition keeps apart from the plain joy-verb.

pronoun her = Elizabeth — every “her” here is Elizabeth
pronoun his = the Lord
pronoun they = the neighbours and relatives
59
Καὶ ἐγένετο ἐν τῇ ⸂ἡμέρᾳ τῇ ὀγδόῃ⸃ ἦλθον περιτεμεῖν τὸ παιδίον, καὶ ἐκάλουν αὐτὸ ἐπὶ τῷ ὀνόματι τοῦ πατρὸς αὐτοῦ Ζαχαρίαν.
And it came to pass on the eighth day that they came to circumcise the child, and they were calling him by the name of his father, Zechariah.

On the eighth day — the day appointed for circumcision.

pronoun they = the neighbours and relatives — both times
pronoun him = the child
pronoun his = the child
60
καὶ ἀποκριθεῖσα ἡ μήτηρ αὐτοῦ εἶπεν· Οὐχί, ἀλλὰ κληθήσεται Ἰωάννης.
But his mother answered and said, “No; he shall be called John.”

He shall be called John — the mother answers, though the naming was the father's.

pronoun his = the child
pronoun he = the child
61
καὶ εἶπαν πρὸς αὐτὴν ὅτι Οὐδείς ἐστιν ⸂ἐκ τῆς συγγενείας⸃ σου ὃς καλεῖται τῷ ὀνόματι τούτῳ.
And they said to her, “There is no one among your relatives who is called by that name.”

No one among your relatives — the objection is about the family, not the name.

pronoun they = the neighbours and relatives
pronoun her = the mother
pronoun your = the mother
62
ἐνένευον δὲ τῷ πατρὶ αὐτοῦ τὸ τί ἂν θέλοι καλεῖσθαι ⸀αὐτό.
And they made signs to his father, what he wanted him to be called.

They made signs — the signs suggest Zechariah could not hear either.

pronoun they = the neighbours and relatives
pronoun his = the child
pronoun he = the father
pronoun him = the child
63
καὶ αἰτήσας πινακίδιον ἔγραψεν λέγων· Ἰωάννης ⸀ἐστὶν ὄνομα αὐτοῦ. καὶ ἐθαύμασαν πάντες.
And asking for a writing tablet he wrote, saying, “John is his name.” And they all marvelled.

John is his name — the writing agrees with the mother, and the tongue is freed.

pronoun he = Zechariah
pronoun his = the child
pronoun they = the neighbours and relatives
64
ἀνεῴχθη δὲ τὸ στόμα αὐτοῦ παραχρῆμα καὶ ἡ γλῶσσα αὐτοῦ, καὶ ἐλάλει εὐλογῶν τὸν θεόν.
And at once his mouth was opened and his tongue loosed, and he spoke, blessing God.

Blessing God — the same verb as at verse 42.

pronoun his = Zechariah — both times
pronoun he = Zechariah
65
καὶ ἐγένετο ἐπὶ πάντας φόβος τοὺς περιοικοῦντας αὐτούς, καὶ ἐν ὅλῃ τῇ ὀρεινῇ τῆς Ἰουδαίας διελαλεῖτο πάντα τὰ ῥήματα ταῦτα,
And fear came upon all who lived around them, and all these words were talked of through the whole hill country of Judea.

Fear came upon all — the phrase of verse 12, now on the neighbours.

pronoun them = Zechariah and Elizabeth
66
καὶ ἔθεντο πάντες οἱ ἀκούσαντες ἐν τῇ καρδίᾳ αὐτῶν, λέγοντες· Τί ἄρα τὸ παιδίον τοῦτο ἔσται; καὶ ⸀γὰρ χεὶρ κυρίου ἦν μετ’ αὐτοῦ.
And all who heard laid them up in their heart, saying, “What then will this child be?” For indeed the hand of the Lord was with him.

Laid them up in their heart — the same thing said of Mary at 2:19 and 2:51.

pronoun them = all these words
pronoun their = all who heard
pronoun this = the child
pronoun him = the child
67
Καὶ Ζαχαρίας ὁ πατὴρ αὐτοῦ ἐπλήσθη πνεύματος ἁγίου καὶ ⸀ἐπροφήτευσεν λέγων·
And Zechariah his father was filled with the Holy Spirit and prophesied, saying:

Prophesied — the silence of verse 20 ends in a song.

pronoun his = the child
68
Εὐλογητὸς κύριος ὁ θεὸς τοῦ Ἰσραήλ, ὅτι ἐπεσκέψατο καὶ ἐποίησεν λύτρωσιν τῷ λαῷ αὐτοῦ,
“Blessed be the Lord, the God of Israel, for he has looked upon his people and worked redemption for them,

Redemption (λύτρωσις, lytrōsis) shares its root with the ransom-word of Mark 10:45.

pronoun he = the Lord
pronoun his = the Lord
pronoun them = his people
69
καὶ ἤγειρεν κέρας σωτηρίας ἡμῖν ⸀ἐν οἴκῳ ⸀Δαυὶδ παιδὸς αὐτοῦ,
and has raised up a horn of salvation for us in the house of David his servant,

A horn of salvation keeps a Semitic picture of strength.

pronoun us = Israel
pronoun his = the Lord
70
καθὼς ἐλάλησεν διὰ στόματος τῶν ⸀ἁγίων ἀπ’ αἰῶνος προφητῶν αὐτοῦ,
as he spoke through the mouth of his holy prophets from of old —

From of old renders “from the age”.

pronoun he = the Lord
pronoun his = the Lord
71
σωτηρίαν ἐξ ἐχθρῶν ἡμῶν καὶ ἐκ χειρὸς πάντων τῶν μισούντων ἡμᾶς,
salvation from our enemies and from the hand of all who hate us,

Salvation — the noun stands again, taking up verse 69.

pronoun our = Israel
pronoun us = Israel
72
ποιῆσαι ἔλεος μετὰ τῶν πατέρων ἡμῶν καὶ μνησθῆναι διαθήκης ἁγίας αὐτοῦ,
to show mercy to our fathers and to remember his holy covenant,

Covenant (διαθήκη, diathēkē) shares its root with the verb of 22:29, to appoint by settlement. English must use two unrelated words — recorded as a loss.

pronoun our = Israel
pronoun his = the Lord
73
ὅρκον ὃν ὤμοσεν πρὸς Ἀβραὰμ τὸν πατέρα ἡμῶν, τοῦ δοῦναι ἡμῖν
the oath which he swore to Abraham our father: to grant us

The oath which he swore keeps the Greek doubling of noun and verb.

pronoun which = the oath
pronoun he = the Lord
pronoun our = Israel
pronoun us = Israel
74
ἀφόβως ἐκ χειρὸς ⸀ἐχθρῶν ῥυσθέντας λατρεύειν αὐτῷ
that we, rescued from the hand of enemies, might serve him without fear,

Serve here is λατρεύω (latreuō), the service given to God — this edition keeps it apart from the table-verb.

pronoun we = Israel
pronoun him = the Lord
75
ἐν ὁσιότητι καὶ δικαιοσύνῃ ἐνώπιον αὐτοῦ ⸂πάσαις ταῖς ἡμέραις⸃ ἡμῶν.
in holiness and righteousness before him all our days.

All our days — the Greek says only “all our days”.

pronoun him = the Lord
pronoun our = Israel
76
καὶ σὺ ⸀δέ, παιδίον, προφήτης Ὑψίστου κληθήσῃ, προπορεύσῃ γὰρ ⸀ἐνώπιον κυρίου ἑτοιμάσαι ὁδοὺς αὐτοῦ,
And you, child, will be called prophet of the Most High; for you will go forth before the Lord to make ready his ways,

You, child — the song turns to the newborn for two verses.

pronoun you = the child — both times
pronoun his = the Lord
77
τοῦ δοῦναι γνῶσιν σωτηρίας τῷ λαῷ αὐτοῦ ἐν ἀφέσει ἁμαρτιῶν αὐτῶν,
to give his people knowledge of salvation in the forgiveness of their sins,

Forgiveness (ἄφεσις, aphesis) — this edition keeps one word for all eight places in the four Gospels.

pronoun his = the Lord
pronoun their = his people
78
διὰ σπλάγχνα ἐλέους θεοῦ ἡμῶν, ἐν οἷς ⸀ἐπισκέψεται ἡμᾶς ἀνατολὴ ἐξ ὕψους,
through the bowels of mercy of our God, in which a dawn from on high will look upon us,

Bowels of mercy keeps the Greek word for the inward parts rather than smoothing it to “tender mercy”. A dawn from on high renders ἀνατολή (anatolē), which is also the rising of a star and the east.

pronoun our = Israel
pronoun which = the bowels of mercy
pronoun us = Israel
Why this rendering

Luke.1.78 Observation

Syntactic observation

Two words hang here. σπλάγχνα, bowels, is unique in the four Gospels, while the verb σπλαγχνίζομαι, to be moved with compassion, is common — five times in Matthew, three in Mark, three in Luke. So the verb recurs and the noun stands once. We have rendered the verb as compassion and recorded the bodily sense as loss (fixed at Mark 6:34); here the noun itself appears and that body shows. ἀνατολή occurs eight times in the four Gospels, seven of them the east or the rising of the sun (Matt 2:1, 2, 9 of the magi; 8:11; 24:27; Mark 16:8; Luke 13:29), and only this one of a person or a light. Hence the versions divide: read from the sun it is a dawn, read from plants it is a shoot; the Greek settles neither. Verse 79 continues at once with ἐπιφᾶναι τοῖς ἐν σκότει, to shine on those sitting in darkness, which brings the light reading nearer. The σκότος and σκιὰ θανάτου of v.79 sound the same Isaiah passage as Matthew 4:16 — and in this edition σκότος is fixed as the dark.

Rendering options · 2

Adopted
“through the bowels of mercy of our God … a dawn from on high”

Basis σπλάγχνα appears as a noun, so the body is kept — what was lost in the verb can be carried here. ἀνατολή is joined to the light of v.79 and taken as a dawn, with the division recorded below.

“through tender mercy … a shoot from on high”

Basis Renders σπλάγχνα by sense only and reads ἀνατολή as a shoot.

Rejected If the body is erased even at the one place the noun appears, there is nowhere in the four Gospels to see what σπλάγχνα is. The shoot reading is possible but fits v.79's to shine less well, and is recorded here.

79
ἐπιφᾶναι τοῖς ἐν σκότει καὶ σκιᾷ θανάτου καθημένοις, τοῦ κατευθῦναι τοὺς πόδας ἡμῶν εἰς ὁδὸν εἰρήνης.
to shine on those sitting in the dark and in the shadow of death, to guide our feet into a way of peace.”

Shadow of death is one Greek word with death in the genitive, and it is kept as two.

pronoun our = Israel
80
Τὸ δὲ παιδίον ηὔξανε καὶ ἐκραταιοῦτο πνεύματι, καὶ ἦν ἐν ταῖς ἐρήμοις ἕως ἡμέρας ἀναδείξεως αὐτοῦ πρὸς τὸν Ἰσραήλ.
And the child grew and became strong in spirit; and he was in the wilderness until the day of his showing to Israel.

His showing (ἀνάδειξις, anadeixis) is used once in the four Gospels.

pronoun he = the child
pronoun his = the child