Romans 4
Abraham — he believed, and it was reckoned to him for righteousness; reckon eleven times. Wage and grace, the one who works and the one who believes, David’s blessed. Righteousness reckoned in the foreskin, circumcision as sign and seal, father of all who believe through foreskin. A promise that came not through law but through righteousness of faith — heir of the world. The God who gives life to the dead and calls what is not — beyond hope, upon hope, unwavering before a dead body and a dead womb. Written for our sake: handed over because of trespasses, raised because of justification.
Why this rendering
Rom.4.3 Observation
Syntactic observation
Ἐπίστευσεν δὲ Ἀβραὰμ τῷ θεῷ καὶ ἐλογίσθη αὐτῷ εἰς δικαιοσύνην — and Abraham believed God, and it was reckoned to him for righteousness. This is the Septuagint of Genesis 15:6 and the spine of the chapter: λογίζομαι, reckon, comes eleven times (vv.3, 4, 5, 6, 8, 9, 10, 11, 22, 23, 24). This edition keeps all eleven as reckon and does not scatter them into count, credit, consider — it is the verb of Luke 22:37, reckoned with the lawless, and of Acts 19:27, reckoned as nothing. εἰς δικαιοσύνην, for righteousness: εἰς is the preposition of direction, kept as for and not paraphrased as as righteous. Vv.4-5 set ἐργάζομαι (work), μισθός (wage), ὀφείλημα (debt) and χάρις (grace) side by side — wage is the word of Matt 20:8, pay them the wage, and debt the word of Matt 6:12, forgive us our debts. V.1 κατὰ σάρκα, according to the flesh, can attach to forefather or to found; this language attaches it to the forefather, and so does the English word order. V.2 καύχημα, a boast, is a different word from 3:27 καύχησις, boasting.
Rendering options · 2
Basis The verb that is a chapter’s spine keeps one word.
Basis Natural convention.
Rejected The eleven-fold repetition becomes invisible — the repetition is the argument.
Why this rendering
Rom.4.11 Observation
Syntactic observation
καὶ σημεῖον ἔλαβεν περιτομῆς, σφραγῖδα τῆς δικαιοσύνης τῆς πίστεως τῆς ἐν τῇ ἀκροβυστίᾳ — and he received a sign of circumcision, a seal of the righteousness of the faith that was in the foreskin. In vv.9-12 ἀκροβυστία, foreskin, comes six times and περιτομή, circumcision, six times — this language sets two words of the body against each other, foreskin ↔ circumcision. σημεῖον, sign, is the word of Acts 2:43, wonders and signs. σφραγίς, seal, is here for the first time in the New Testament and is a word of Revelation. Vv.11-12 have father three times — father of all who believe, father of circumcision, our father Abraham. V.12 στοιχοῦσιν τοῖς ἴχνεσιν, keep in step with the footsteps: στοιχέω is the verb of Acts 21:24, keep in step with the law — a word for walking in line. The genitives stack: τῆς δικαιοσύνης τῆς πίστεως τῆς ἐν τῇ ἀκροβυστίᾳ — this edition keeps the stack as a seal of the righteousness of the faith.
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Basis As settled at 2:25.
Why this rendering
Rom.4.17 Observation
Syntactic observation
κατέναντι οὗ ἐπίστευσεν θεοῦ τοῦ ζῳοποιοῦντος τοὺς νεκροὺς καὶ καλοῦντος τὰ μὴ ὄντα ὡς ὄντα — before the God whom he believed, who gives life to the dead and calls the things that are not as being. ζῳοποιέω, give life, is the verb of John 5:21, as the Father raises the dead and gives them life. τὰ μὴ ὄντα ὡς ὄντα sets two participles of to be against each other, negative and positive — kept as the things that are not as being. The parenthesis of vv.16-17 (ὅς ἐστιν πατὴρ πάντων ἡμῶν … τέθεικά σε) is the base text’s own, and the quotation is Genesis 17:5. V.18 παρ’ ἐλπίδα ἐπ’ ἐλπίδι, beyond hope, upon hope — one noun, two prepositions, kept as two. V.19 νενεκρωμένον (already dead) and νέκρωσις (deadness) are the verb and noun of νεκρός, dead — one root with v.17’s gives life to the dead, so that Abraham’s body and Sarah’s womb fall inside those dead. V.20 οὐ διεκρίθη, did not waver, is the verb of Matt 21:21, and ἐνεδυναμώθη, was strengthened, the verb of Acts 9:22, Saul was all the more strengthened. V.21 πληροφορηθείς, fully assured, is the verb of Luke 1:1, the things fully accomplished — here with a person as subject, a different rendering by site.
Rendering options · 1
Basis The negative and positive of to be face each other in one clause.
Why this rendering
Rom.4.25 Observation
Syntactic observation
ὃς παρεδόθη διὰ τὰ παραπτώματα ἡμῶν καὶ ἠγέρθη διὰ τὴν δικαίωσιν ἡμῶν — who was handed over because of our trespasses and was raised because of our justification. διά with the accusative comes twice in the same form; the first is usually read as cause and the second as purpose, but the base text uses one preposition for both, and this edition keeps because of twice so that the sameness stays visible (the reading for is recorded here). παρεδόθη, was handed over, is the verb of 1:24, 26, 28 (God handed them over) and Judas’s verb at Matt 26:15 — passive, with no agent named. ἠγέρθη, was raised, is the verb of v.24, the one who raised. παράπτωμα, trespass, is the word of Matt 6:14-15, if you forgive their trespasses; δικαίωσις, justification, is the noun of the δικαιόω that fills the chapter and stands only in Romans in the New Testament (4:25; 5:18). Behind the verse lies the Septuagint of Isaiah 53:12, handed over because of their sins (διὰ τὰς ἁμαρτίας αὐτῶν παρεδόθη).
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Basis One preposition in the base text, one word here.
Basis The purposive reading.
Rejected It splits what the base text does not split.