Romans 7
A woman bound while her husband lives — you, put to death to the law, become another’s. Is the law sin — may it not be. Desire known through you shall not desire; sin taking a foothold in the commandment and living again; the commandment for life found to be for death. A holy, righteous, good commandment and an I sold under sin. Not practising what I want, doing what I hate — sin dwelling in me. Delight of the inner man and another law in the members. Wretched man that I am — grace to God.
Why this rendering
Rom.7.4 Observation
Syntactic observation
Ὥστε, ἀδελφοί μου, καὶ ὑμεῖς ἐθανατώθητε τῷ νόμῳ διὰ τοῦ σώματος τοῦ Χριστοῦ — so, my brothers, you also were put to death to the law through the body of Christ. ἐθανατώθητε is the passive of θανατόω, the verb of Matt 10:21, will put them to death — not the died (ἀποθνῄσκω) of chapter 6 — and to the law (τῷ νόμῳ) is the same dative as 6:2, to sin. Vv.2 and 6 κατήργηται ἀπὸ τοῦ νόμου, abolished from the law, is the καταργέω of 3:3, 3:31 and 4:14 now with a person as subject — this edition keeps abolished and leaves the strangeness, since released would cut the thread to chapter 3. V.3 χρηματίσει, will be called, is the verb of Acts 11:26, were called Christians; μοιχαλίς, adulteress, the word of Matt 12:39, an adulterous generation. V.1 for as long a time as he lives and v.2 the living husband are tied by live. V.5 παθήματα, passions, is the same word as 8:18, the sufferings of the present time — this language renders it by site (recorded as a loss). V.6 καινότης πνεύματος ↔ παλαιότης γράμματος (newness of spirit ↔ oldness of writing) sets against each other the two words of 6:4, newness of life, and 6:6, old man.
Rendering options · 2
Basis One verb, one word — the strangeness belongs to the base text.
Basis The paraphrase by sense.
Rejected It hides that this is the verb of 3:31, do we abolish law?
Lost in translation
πάθημα is one word at 7:5 (passions of sins) and 8:18 (sufferings), and this language splits it.
Why this rendering
Rom.7.8 Observation
Syntactic observation
ἀφορμὴν δὲ λαβοῦσα ἡ ἁμαρτία διὰ τῆς ἐντολῆς κατειργάσατο ἐν ἐμοὶ πᾶσαν ἐπιθυμίαν — but sin, taking a foothold through the commandment, worked out in me every desire. ἀφορμή, foothold, is the word for a base from which an army sets out — kept apart from opportunity (εὐκαιρία, Matt 26:16) in vv.8 and 11. V.7 you shall not desire (Οὐκ ἐπιθυμήσεις) is the tenth commandment of Exodus 20:17 and has no object; this edition adds none. ἐπιθυμία (desire) and ἐπιθυμέω (desire) stand in one verse, and this language keeps them on one root. V.9 ἀνέζησεν, lived again, is the verb of Luke 15:24, was dead and lived again — here it is sin that lives again. Who the I (ἐγώ) of vv.7-25 is — Paul, Adam, Israel under the law, humanity — the base text does not say; this edition keeps I and does not decide. V.10 εὑρέθη, was found, is the passive of εὑρίσκω, the verb of Matt 13:46, finding. V.11 ἐξηπάτησεν, beguiled, is the verb of the Septuagint at Genesis 3:13, the serpent beguiled me.
Rendering options · 1
Basis What the base text does not say the translation does not decide.
Why this rendering
Rom.7.15 Observation
Syntactic observation
ὃ γὰρ κατεργάζομαι οὐ γινώσκω· οὐ γὰρ ὃ θέλω τοῦτο πράσσω, ἀλλ’ ὃ μισῶ τοῦτο ποιῶ — for what I work out I do not know; for what I want, this I do not practise, but what I hate, this I do. Vv.15-20 alternate three verbs of doing — κατεργάζομαι (work out: vv.15, 17, 18, 20), πράσσω (practise: vv.15, 19), ποιέω (do: vv.15, 16, 19, 20, 21); this edition keeps them apart as work out / practise / do, the pairing held since 1:32 and 2:3. There are also two words for good — ἀγαθός (vv.12, 13, 18, 19) and καλός (vv.16, 18, 21) — and this language has only good for both (recorded as a loss). Vv.17 and 20 ἡ οἰκοῦσα ἐν ἐμοὶ ἁμαρτία, the sin dwelling in me: οἰκέω is one root with κατοικέω, the settled of Matt 2:23. Vv.17 and 20 are the same sentence — the base text repeats it, and so does this edition. V.18 παράκειται, lies beside, stands only here and in v.21 in the New Testament — the wanting and the evil both lie beside.
Rendering options · 1
Basis Where the base text distinguishes, so does the rendering.
Lost in translation
ἀγαθός ↔ καλός — this language has good for both and loses the pair.
Why this rendering
Rom.7.24 Observation
Syntactic observation
ταλαίπωρος ἐγὼ ἄνθρωπος· τίς με ῥύσεται ἐκ τοῦ σώματος τοῦ θανάτου τούτου — wretched man that I am! who will rescue me from the body of this death? τούτου (this) stands right after θανάτου (death) but can attach to σώματος (body) — the body of this death, or this body of death; this edition keeps the word order and lets the reader hold both. In vv.21-25 νόμος, law, comes seven times with different genitives — the law of God, the law of my mind, the law of sin, another law in the members, this law of v.21; this edition keeps law for all seven and does not paraphrase as principle (the decision of 3:27) — the strange places are the base text’s own. V.22 τὸν ἔσω ἄνθρωπον, the inner man: ἔσω is the word of Matt 26:58, going inside. V.23 ἀντιστρατευόμενον, warring against, is a word of στρατεύομαι, serve as a soldier (Luke 3:14), and αἰχμαλωτίζοντα, taking captive, the verb of Luke 21:24, led captive — the military figure of chapter 6 continues. V.25 χάρις τῷ θεῷ, grace to God, is the exclamation of 6:17, and the Ἄρα οὖν (so then) that follows keeps the base text’s order, conclusion after exclamation — not rearranged. ῥύσεται, rescue, is the verb of Matt 6:13, deliver us from the evil.
Rendering options · 2
Basis As decided at 3:27.
Basis The paraphrase by sense.
Rejected One word taking seven different genitives is the structure of the passage.